tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6204718322638463179.post7204111413693242311..comments2023-10-08T03:36:14.869-06:00Comments on Reflections on the Writing Life: An Appalachian TaleAlice C. Linsleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13069827354696169270noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6204718322638463179.post-28618457007965733462009-01-17T13:24:00.000-07:002009-01-17T13:24:00.000-07:00Carla, This is a wonderful story. I know story te...Carla, This is a wonderful story. I know story telling comes natural to you as you imbibed it from your childhood in the hills of Eastern Kentucky. <BR/><BR/>I think that the story is perfect as it stands. We don't need to know exactly when David leaves to search for the box. We only need to know that he isn't there when Treana dies. It makes the story more poignant.Alice C. Linsleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13069827354696169270noreply@blogger.com