The following poem was crafted by two of my students working together. Sometimes group writing produces good work, and I consider this to be worthy of publication.
This is a wonderful little gem, an accurate presentation of the content of the verse, but looking at it from a totally unexpected direction. I'm approaching 70 now and it's rare for me to think a new thought - one I haven';t thought before, but this jewel of a poem has provoked a whole new direction of thinking.
It's compact, absolutely nothing wasted, with a very pleasing sound when read aloud. This is more than worthy of publication. Your students are to be congratulated - as is their teacher.
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Amazing!
This is a wonderful little gem,
an accurate presentation of the content of the verse, but looking at it from a totally unexpected direction. I'm approaching 70 now and it's rare for me to think a new thought - one I haven';t thought before, but this jewel of a poem has provoked a whole new direction of thinking.
It's compact, absolutely nothing wasted, with a very pleasing sound when read aloud. This is more than worthy of publication. Your students are to be congratulated - as is their teacher.
ed pacht
Thank you, Ed.
I'll read your comment to the students. This will encourage them!
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